First, be tactful. Telling someone that the characters
in their novel sound like robots is potentially hurtful. Make an honest list of
what you think about the material and then go back and revise it as carefully
as possible, taking your friend's feelings into account. Second, be honest. It
won't help anyone to tell them that their book is on its way to being an Amazon
bestseller if it's an inferior and poorly-written piece of work. Third, be
helpful and individualize your response. For example, if you think the whole
book should be rewritten from start to finish but you know perfectly well that
the writer has neither the ability nor the intention to do so, don't provide
that kind of feedback. It won't be useful. Make sure that whatever you say is
kind and specific so that the writer knows how to implement changes. Instead of
saying, "That scene in part two didn't work for me at all," tell the
author why and if at all possible, suggest a way to improve it.
Last, talk about the writing instead of the writer so
that the person doesn’t feel attacked. In the end, your writer friends will
love you for your diplomacy and will benefit by your carefully chosen advice.
Sigrid Macdonald is the author of three books and a
manuscript editor. You can find her at http://sigridmacdonald.blogspot.com/